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The Beam

183-the-beam

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v2 ¶1

There was once a sorcerer who was standing in the midst of a great crowd of people performing his wonders. He had a cock brought in, which lifted a heavy beam and carried it as if it were light as a feather. But a girl was present who had just found a four-leaved clover, and had thus become so wise that no deception could stand out against her, and she saw that the beam was nothing but a straw. So she cried, you people, do you not see that it is a straw that the cock is carrying, and no beam. Immediately the enchantment vanished, and the people saw what it was, and drove the magician away in shame and disgrace. He, however, full of inward anger, said, I will soon revenge myself.

v3 ¶1

Once there was a kind sorcerer who was showing his magic tricks to a big crowd. He brought a big, strong rooster to help him. The rooster lifted a heavy wooden beam and carried it easily, as if it were as light as a feather. But a little girl was there. She had just found a four-leaf clover, and this made her very wise. She could see right through the trick. She knew the heavy beam was just a simple straw. So she called out to everyone, "Look! Do you not see that the rooster is carrying a straw, not a beam?" The magic spell broke right away. The people saw the truth and felt very silly. They drove the magician away in shame. But the sorcerer was secretly angry. He said, "I will get my revenge soon.

v2 ¶2

After some time the girl's wedding-day came, and she was decked out, and went in a great procession over the fields to the place where the church was. All at once she came to a stream which was very much swollen, and there was no bridge and no plank to cross it. Then the bride nimbly took her clothes up, and wanted to wade through it. And just as she was thus standing in the water, a man, and it was the sorcerer, cried mockingly close beside her, aha. Where are your eyes that you take that for water. Then her eyes were opened, and she saw that she was standing with her clothes lifted up in the middle of a field that was blue with the flowers of blue flax. Then all the people saw it likewise, and chased her away with ridicule and laughter.

v3 ¶2

After a while, the girl’s wedding day arrived. She looked beautiful in her new dress. A big crowd walked with her across the green fields to the church. Suddenly, they came to a wide river. The water was rushing fast, and there was no bridge to cross it. The bride lifted her dress and stepped into the water to wade across. Just then, a man stood right beside her. It was the old sorcerer. He laughed loudly. "Look at you!" he teased. "You think this is water? Where are your eyes?" Suddenly, her eyes opened wide. She looked down and gasped. She was not in the river at all! She was standing in the middle of a giant field. The whole ground was covered in bright blue flowers. Everyone saw it too. They all laughed and pointed, and they chased her away.

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