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The Flail from Heaven

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v2 ¶1

A countryman was once going out to plough with a pair of oxen. When he got to the field, both the animals, horns began to grow, and went on growing, and when he wanted to go home they were so big that the oxen could not get through the gateway. By good luck a butcher came by just then, and he delivered them over to him, and made the bargain in this way, that he should bring the butcher a peck of rape-seed, and then the butcher was to count him out a brabant taler for every seed. I call that well sold. The peasant now went home, and carried the peck of rape-seed to him on his back. On the way, however, he lost one seed out of the bag. The butcher paid him justly as agreed on, and if the peasant had not lost the seed, he would have had one taler more.

v3 ¶1

A farmer once went out to plow his field with two oxen. When he arrived, something strange happened. The horns on the oxen began to grow bigger and bigger. By the time he wanted to go home, the animals were so huge they could not fit through the gate. Luckily, a butcher walked by. The farmer sold the big oxen to him. The deal was simple: the farmer would bring the butcher a bag of seeds, and the butcher would give him money for every single seed. The farmer carried the heavy bag of seeds home. On the way, he dropped one seed. The butcher paid him exactly as they agreed. If he had not lost that one seed, he would have earned even more money.

v2 ¶2

By the time he returned, the seed had grown into a tree which reached up to the sky. Then thought the peasant, as you have the chance, you must just see what the angels are doing up there above. So he climbed up, and saw that the angels above were threshing oats, and he looked on. While he was thus watching them, he observed that the tree on which he was standing, was beginning to totter. He peeped down, and saw that someone was just going to cut it down. If I were to fall down from hence it would be a bad thing, thought he, and in his extremity he did not know how to save himself better than by taking the chaff of the oats which lay there in heaps, and twisting a rope of it. He likewise snatched a hoe and a flail which were lying about in heaven, and let himself down by the rope.

v3 ¶2

By the time he came back, the seed had grown into a tall tree that reached up to the sky. The peasant thought, "I should go see what the angels are doing up there." So he climbed up and watched them. They were busy threshing oats. While he watched, he saw the tree he was standing on start to shake. He looked down and saw someone was coming to cut it down. "If I fall, it will be a terrible thing," he thought. He did not know what to do. He grabbed some straw and made a strong rope. He also grabbed a hoe and a flail that were lying there. Then, he tied the rope to the tree and let himself down to the ground.

v2 ¶3

But he came down on the earth exactly in the middle of a deep, deep hole. So it was a real stroke of luck that he had brought the hoe, for he hoed himself a flight of steps with it, and mounted up, and took the flail with him as a token of his truth, so that no one could have any doubt of his story.

v3 ¶3

But he landed right in the middle of a deep, deep hole. It was a lucky thing that he had brought his little garden hoe. He used it to dig out steps for himself. Then he climbed up, and he took the magic flail with him to show everyone. He held it high so that no one could ever doubt his story.

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