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The Messengers

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original ¶4

Then he said to Death: “O Death, why is it that you have come in search of me so soon? I am young, rich, happy. I am betrothed to a maid who loves me. Life looks very bright and fair.”

v1 ¶4

Then he said to Death: "O Death, why is it that you have come in search of me so soon? I am young, rich, happy. I am betrothed to a maid who loves me. Life looks very bright and fair."

original ¶6

“Your prayer to the Holy Mother has saved you,” he said. “I had indeed come in search of you. You were about to die from an accident with your hunting arms. See, I have already retreated a pace. I have decided not to take you with me this time.”

v1 ¶6

"Your prayer to the Holy Mother has saved you," he said. "I had indeed come in search of you. You were about to die from an accident with your hunting arms. See, I have already retreated a pace. I have decided not to take you with me this time."

original ¶8

“O Death, I am going to make a request of you. Please do not come up to me so suddenly again. It gives me a fright. Next time you come for me will you please be so kind as to send messengers in advance to give me a little warning?”

v1 ¶8

"O Death, I am going to make a request of you. Please do not come up to me so suddenly again. It gives me a fright. Next time you come for me will you please be so kind as to send messengers in advance to give me a little warning?"

original ¶9

“Yes, young cavalier,” responded Death. “I will gladly do what you ask. I give you my promise that next time I will send my messengers ahead of me to warn you that I am approaching.”

v1 ¶9

"Yes, young cavalier," responded Death. "I will gladly do what you ask. I give you my promise that next time I will send my messengers ahead of me to warn you that I am approaching."

original ¶13

“We are glad that Death passed on and left you,” said the children.

v1 ¶13

"We are glad that Death passed on and left you," said the children.

original ¶14

“If he hadn’t we could not have had you for our grandfather,” said the namesake grandson Vladmiro, snuggling closer in his arms.

v1 ¶14

"If he hadn't we could not have had you for our grandfather," said the namesake grandson Vladmiro, snuggling closer in his arms.

original ¶15

“You do not have to fear Death now, grandfather, do you?” asked the little Maria. “He will keep his promise and send his messengers, don’t you think so?”

v1 ¶15

"You do not have to fear Death now, grandfather, do you?" asked the little Maria. "He will keep his promise and send his messengers, don't you think so?"

original ¶16

“Yes, Death is a good Christian and will keep his word,” replied the aged cavalier.

v1 ¶16

"Yes, Death is a good Christian and will keep his word," replied the aged cavalier.

original ¶19

“Why have you come to-day?” he cried in alarm. “Why is it that you have not kept your word? You gave me your promise that you would send your messengers, next time you came, to warn me of your approach.”

v1 ¶19

"Why have you come to-day?" he cried in alarm. "Why is it that you have not kept your word? You gave me your promise that you would send your messengers, next time you came, to warn me of your approach."

original ¶20

“I have kept my word,” said Death. “I have sent my messengers.”

v1 ¶20

"I have kept my word," said Death. "I have sent my messengers."

original ¶21

“Where are they?” asked the old man in amazement.

v1 ¶21

"Where are they?" asked the old man in amazement.

original ¶22

Death pointed to Vladmiro’s snowy hair.

v1 ¶22

Death pointed to Vladmiro's snowy hair.

original ¶23

“I have sent my messengers in your white locks, your failing eyesight and hearing, the wrinkles on your cheeks. Can it be that you have failed to recognize them?”

v1 ¶23

"I have sent my messengers in your white locks, your failing eyesight and hearing, the wrinkles on your cheeks. Can it be that you have failed to recognize them?"

original ¶26

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